At Present we rely on oil for most of our energy needs However oil is a fossil fuel and cause air pollution and it will eventually run out Nuclear energy is the only practical and clean sources of energy for the world do you agree

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At Present we rely on oil for most of our energy needs. However oil is a fossil fuel and cause air pollution, and it will eventually run out. Nuclear energy is the only practical and clean sources of energy for the world do you agree?

Nowadays, pollution has become a major concern globally. There are different fossil fuels, which have played their role in causing this problem. Oil and nuclear energy are few amongst them. These days, people have mix opinion when it comes to choosing between what sort of sources are required to generate energy. Few believe nuclear energy to be replacement of fossil fuels. This essay will completely agree with the point of view of people regarding nuclear energy as a replacement in future.

Currently, crude oil has been seen as an important fuel for numerous purpose. Around the globe, there are a lot of countries, which use crude oil to generate electricity, run power plants, manufacturing plants, etc. However, they are well aware of the disadvantages it has on our environment and the level of damage it has been causing in past. But, they are out of choice. As for decades, oil has been used for emission of energy.

However, as science has developed and new discoveries have been made. We are witnessing a downward trend in consumption of oil. Furthermore, people have started to opt for other options for generating energy such as; nuclear, wind and solar. However, a lot of countries have now opted to establish nuclear power plants for energy purpose and commercial use. Countries such as; Pakistan,Japan, India, China, etc have been using nuclear energy to replace oil. Therefore, this has lead to a decrease in use of oil and hence there has been reduction in overall pollution index contribution by above mentioned countries.

So, this has lead to an overall decrease in pollution. Also, it is believed in future there would be more reduction in consumption of oil, which will increase dependency on nuclear energy and this will lead to further reduction in pollution overall.

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Average: 6.1 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, as for, sort of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06375838926 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72628032073 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540268456376 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.240178586 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4210526316 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307980263594 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096693449433 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677101183278 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178936842004 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283993243762 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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