Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Nowadays, preferences of people have changed, when it comes to deciding whether to live in a house or an apartment. In my country, people tend to be more fond of huge houses as compared to apartments.
People who tend to live in cities such as Lahore, Islamabad, Faisalabad and etc. prefer to live in large houses as compared to apartments. This is because of ample space they have. Another reason for preferring house over apartment is that it gives you an opportunity to have your own terrace and ground. By living in a house, people tend to have control of what is happening around them. They have their own privacy. This way they are more willing to live independently with full resources at their disposal.
While on the other-hand, in metropolitan cities; such as Karachi, New York and London, people tend to prefer to in an apartment. It is due to the fact that by doing so, they avoid high maintenance cost and have high sense of security, plus they also have someone in worst case scenarios.
In my opinion living in an apartment is more feasible and economical in today's world. As it provides you with an opportunity to utilize resources at its maximum. While, if you are living in a house, you need more resources and there are higher chances that they might not be utilized properly. Therefore, in today's world it is better to opt for an apartment as compared to a house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...easible and economical in todays world. As it provides you with an opportunity to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68699186992 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64906258012 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.887001769 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411894246821 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148696725085 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981586529252 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25600723081 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944458731675 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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