Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days crime rate is on rising side, different sorts of crimes are being conducted in various countries. There is a mix opinion regarding how to overcome this problem, few believe harsh punishment to be way out, while on the other-hand some analyst want to analyse the core issues of the problem. this essay will discuss both opinions of how to control crime rate.
Every nation has its own set of culture and problems. In continent of Africa, reasons for committing crime are different as compared to other continents. Conventional method of overcoming crime is to have harsh punishment for criminals. However, on numerous occasions harsh punishment has reduced crime rate, as people tend to fear law, but here different type of questions rise; is it the only way out?, what if wrong person is punished?, what is possibility of having some valid reason that lead to crime being committed?. These questions have caused society to think about other methods to minimize crime rate.
Furthermore, in order to reduce crime rate, it is better to find the root cause and fix it. Few analysts believe poverty, unemployment and peer pressure to be the main reason. Therefore, they believe it is important to overcome these issues, rather than just sending someone in long prison because this will only fix the problem in short run, but in long-run it will exaggerate further and cause more problems for the society.
In order to maintain law and order situation and reduce crime rate, it is important to focus on the root causes, as people who commit crimes are either in difficult position or under some sort of influence. Therefore,in my opinion it is better to fix it by catering the root cause rather than making punishment harsh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, in short, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95221843003 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56846744364 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3447531865 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246820120177 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089768187642 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570053041635 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152950072359 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336360983777 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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