You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how

Essay topics:

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to request some time off work as I have enrolled for a part-time course on network design and link budget analysis. Let me explain in detail.

this is an evening course for two months specially designed for the working professionals, therefore, I request you to allow me to leave the office early around 5 pm. To compensate I would be coming to office early around 8 am so that the ongoing projects are not affected. Additionally, I am willing to work from home on weekends to cover any pending work. The course covers both theoretical as well as practical aspects of network optimization and link budget analysis, therefore, it will enable me to design a cost-effective network for our customers. Furthermore, I will get certified on link budget tools like INPT as well as a sat-master pro which will enable me to do link analysis for our designing new networks.

I believe doing this course not only help me become more efficient at work but also help the company to reduce the capital as well as operational cost of new networks.
I look forward to your approval.
Yours sincerely
Saad

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... analysis. Let me explain in detail. this is an evening course for two months spe...
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Line 4, column 394, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ork. The course covers both theoretical as well as practical aspects of network optimizati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77157360406 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83390609082 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624365482234 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6616839237 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212348104582 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769780787856 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645505586858 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117280332432 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700778552353 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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