You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Fonseca,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I’m writing to request some time off from work for the post graduation I have enrolled for recently.
As discussed in our last one-to-one meeting, I have developed an interest for Project Management after the SAP project we had completed in May 2016, in which I was the single point of contact from Emerging Markets. This has motivated me to enroll for a two-year course in Project Management. Learning the advantage of the topics covered in the course, I was delighted to know that this would not only add value to my job but also will be highly contributing to the company’s upcoming projects, especially on cost-cutting.
In this regard, I would like to request you some time off the initial stage wherein I would need to submit a project on my experience and findings in any assignment I have taken up at the present workplace. Though I’m well-versed with the topic, however, this would need ample time to prepare the detail report with presentations.
If granted permission, I would ensure that I catchup up with all topics and meetings I have missed in my absence. I shall schedule a session with Ms. Arcas to update me on Rolling Forecast and Sales Targets as soon as I report back to the office.
Hope you would be able to consider my request and grant me the time of work. Please let me know if you need any further details from me. Anticipating a positive response at your earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
Sara Tomasz.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8122605364 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73717719338 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1848292643 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282991587934 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957832896434 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830537719298 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163313288509 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113257220683 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.