You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager, in your letter
• Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have off time
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear manager,
As you know I am your working in your organization and I am doing master in management. Recent I have taken admission in university.
I cannot manage my work. if you give me some off days than I will complete my qualification. In coming month exam will conduct in my university. my study related you. When I was returned to home from company, I have not much time for study. I required clean and comfortable environment for academic success. Kindly watch my earlier brilliant performance which I done in last few months. This study gives me a huge success in my academic career.
if I complete my academic qualification then I will rapidly improve on my working also I will give you lots of help in your coming project. I have lots of economical strategy. I am too much exited to complete my qualification. It is a dream for me and my parental.
I shall be very thankful to you, if you accept my humble request. thanks
Regards,
FARAZ ZAKI KHAN
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear manager, As you know I am your working in your or...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...iversity. I cannot manage my work. if you give me some off days than I will c...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iversity. I cannot manage my work. if you give me some off days than I will c...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...nth exam will conduct in my university. my study related you. When I was returned ...
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Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
...y earlier brilliant performance which I done in last few months. This study gives me...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...uge success in my academic career. if I complete my academic qualification th...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uge success in my academic career. if I complete my academic qualification th...
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Line 11, column 156, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... in your coming project. I have lots of economical strategy. I am too much exited to compl...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is a dream for me and my parental. I shall be very thankful to you, if you ...
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Line 15, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...o you, if you accept my humble request. thanks Regards, FARAZ ZAKI KHAN
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72832369942 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8842598461 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612716763006 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3996572046 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.125 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8125 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309274743634 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951304318397 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883830457445 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186036582903 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303883223665 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.97 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.