You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager, in your letter
• Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have off time
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to request you for a month off from work in order to complete my Master’s in business relations. I have almost finished my project work and assignments which need to be submitted before the 20th of February.
I joined this office last year, since then I have not taken any unnecessary leave, so I have some leave balance of twenty days, which I would like to utilize now. In addition to that, I might need ten more days leave to complete my exams. I would be grateful if you could provide me with the leave which I need now without a salary reduction. Even if I am off from work I will answer all the emails and be present in the office on emergency situations. On return, I assure you that I will come to the office earlier than usual and work on Saturdays so that I can catch up with the work.
I understand in my absence there will be some inconvenience to you and rest of the team but I guarantee you that my qualification will surely be beneficial to the company. As our company is planning to expand, by incorporate new clients, my expertise will help to build better business relations with present and prospective customers.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...itted before the 20th of February. I joined this office last year, since the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59192825112 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69973033986 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587443946188 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9089219328 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274644088904 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101372175296 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575255398092 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159357011095 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359002190923 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.