Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is often argued that the government should spend money on public services instead of spending its budget in arts like music and theatre. I agree that spending in public sector is important however I also believe that funding in arts is also crucial for society.
On the one hand, the government should definitely allocate a large part of its budget on public services. To begin with, public services such as transportation services, educational institutions and medical facilities play vital role in the development of a country. So, investment in such facilities will improve the living condition of the citizens. If, for instance, a society has shortage of well-equipped hospitals and advanced medicines then it will affect the health of the people who is living there. This is the reason why it is said that investment in public services is necessary.
On the other hand, music and theatre is not a waste of money, since they are an integral part of a society’s cultural and intellectual development and amusement. Firstly, music and theatre are the foundation of the society, or it can be said as a reflection of the cultural heritage of the society. So, investing in such trait cannot be claimed as wastage. Moreover, promoting more people to learn such arts will have a positive impact on people’s intelligence and reduce the stress level. Both participant and viewer will be equally benefited because recent studies have proven that music has a heeling capacity. Lastly, it is a means of entertainment. People spend money to watch the show, music or theatre, this way what ever money is spent can be earned back. Thus, it is not a waste of money but in reality, it is an investment which will eventually pay back.
To conclude, although I agree with the fact that it is highly important for a government to invest in the public services, I also believe that art and theatre is also an integral part of the society, neglecting it completely will be not advisable. In fact, I opine that there should be proper funding in both sectors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
... payback. To conclude, although I agree with the fact that it is highly important for a government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, lastly, moreover, so, thus, for example, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99120234604 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86362097258 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472140762463 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8206472657 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287974349083 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917339633925 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756167037164 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170115291165 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351327364781 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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