You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you d

Essay topics:

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.

Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter

explain where you live
describe the problem
give reasons why you do not want this development

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings for the day!

My name is Amanpreet Kaur, the residence of Chandigarh, and through this letter, I want to describe the problem to increase the size of the airport in my city.

Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. I live in sector 48, which is behind the Chandigarh airport. There are so many other organisations and residential places near this airport.

Although extending the size of the airport and the number of flights is a positive development to increase the economy of the nation, the life of local people will suffer from this development. If the size of the airport will increase, then the land which is provided by the government to homeless people on rent basis is acquired by the government.

Because of this development, not only the school organisations but also local hospital suffer from the noise problem. If the flights will increase then it creates noise every 15 minutes, which is not good for patients and children.

I hope your newspaper will publish this not only aware of the local people but also bring the attention of the government too.

Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72239937065 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2089850469 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173259598501 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699339780554 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383613046523 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754300288272 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039286642522 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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