You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
• Explain where you live
• Describe the problem
• Give reasons why you do not want this development
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you about my discontent about the latest infrastructural developments plans for making the airport bigger and consequent increase in the number of flights. Allow me to explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate I am a local resident of Palm islands and my house is located in the close vicinity of the airport. As you are aware that the current airport is a defence airport with a lower frequency of flights however the local government plans to commercialize the airport by expanding it and increasing the number of flights. Although such a move may be beneficial for the state however it is going to affect the local resident in many ways. Firstly, the expansion of the airport means extensive infrastructural works which will have an effect not only on the demography of the island but the flora and fauna as well. Additionally increasing the number of flights would mean an increase in noise pollution which will make the life of local residents miserable.
Hence I would request you to publish this article in your newspaper so that more and more people are aware of this and can come and join this cause to prevent the construction of the airport.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours faithfully
Saad
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...island but the flora and fauna as well. Additionally increasing the number of flights would ...
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... the life of local residents miserable. Hence I would request you to publish thi...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...life of local residents miserable. Hence I would request you to publish this art...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87155963303 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79672093878 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8086277696 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331808963413 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11442928502 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796244372432 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167915299428 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596497345243 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.