You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:- What repairs are you going to do?- How will it affect the restaurant?- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.

Essay topics:

You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:
- What repairs are you going to do?
- How will it affect the restaurant?
- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.

Dear Sir,
I am living in a house next to your restaurant, therefore, would like to inform you of critical repair and reconstruction works which will be happening from tomorrow. Let me explain in detail.

To elucidate I have recently purchased this house from the previous owner. Since the house was unoccupied for many years thus it needs a major repair on outer walls including the painting. Additionally, I need to install smoke alarms which is mandatory as per the local government regulations. Although we will try not to disturb your daily operations and customers however noise will be generated from the repair works as well as by smoke alarm testing which may cause some inconvenience to your diners. Lastly, the front gate of your restaurant will be blocked by the materials required for the reconstruction and repair works.

Therefore, to mitigate these effects I would suggest you use the back door of your restaurant for smooth operations.
I look forward to your cooperation in this matter.
Yours faithfully

Saad

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12352941176 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88295911993 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9604175278 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233569057544 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795795232384 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682565763826 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125840184337 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564722774337 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.