You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. One day you find something wrong with your accommodation. So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, and whether if it is right.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Abhishek Singh, studying the British University and head of the hostel committee from past 5 months. I am living in the hostel from the start of course. On the behalf of our committee, I am writing this letter regarding the un-appropriate behaviour of the new vendor and his negligence regarding cleaning.
From the start of my stay, hostel rooms and corridor were cleaned on the daily basis. If there was any problem in any room, previous vendor always tried to solve the problem at earliest. However, the new vendor is not taking his responsibilities seriously as rooms are now cleaned at weakly basis while corridors are not cleaned by him yet. Many students has asked him to clean their rooms on daily basis, but his behaviour becomes rude towards them.
As head of hostel, I have tried to communicate and settle the issue but he is not changing his attitude. In order to solve the issue, I have asked to sign the register daily about cleaning of the rooms and solving other problems regarding water supplies. I hope you will support my move and ask the vendor to fill the register daily so that he will do his work properly.
Yours sincerely
Abhishek Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...e not cleaned by him yet. Many students has asked him to clean their rooms on daily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53350976586 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8395918417 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0737028004574 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278911802646 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333452660356 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457827081744 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172025518845 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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