Dear Sir,
I am writing to request you for some time off work during the upcoming weeks. As you know that our senior management has organized a three day training for the employees of our department as a part of skill development program. I would like to participate in the same to gain some advanced knowledge about the current processes being carried out in our project. This in-turn would be helpful to enhance the efficacy of the team.
Let me briefly explain the schedule of the training. There are three sessions on the whole, and the first one will be on next week Monday from 8 am till 12 pm. The second lecture is on Wednesday tentative from 9 am up to 1 pm. Then the final schedule is on Friday from 2 pm to 4 pm. The sitting on Wednesday has not yet been confirmed. However, I request you to make a note of the timings.
I am well aware of the work that has been allocated for next week. One of my colleagues is willing to take care of the assigned to me. Training has been given to him already and there is no need to deploy additional resources. Any clarification or queried could be discussed either over the phone or office email.
I look forward to your positive response and kindly do the needful.
Sincerely,
Prasanth Gunasekaran
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, well, you know, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58372468934 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1091114739 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6875 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192418787102 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049760623708 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777952346818 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931700980794 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076180312398 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.