Your friend has just won a sizeable amount of money in the lottery. She would like your advice as to how to spend it.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
congratulate him/her on their win
Give practical advice on how to spend the money
advise him/her on benefits/drawbacks associated with large wins
Dear Thomas
Hope you are doing great. How is everyone at home? Glad to know that you've won a great deal of cash in the lottery. My hearty congratulations for your achievement. I know you've been expecting the announcement from quite a long time and it turned out to be favorable for you. I'm extremely happy and hope there is an immense reason to spend them.
I could suggest you some logical ways to spend the prize. Would you like to save a handful of money for future? Then, go for a fixed deposit and invest 40 percent of the reward in it. One third of the remaining money could be used to buy a car which you had been wishing for the past 10 years, when you had sold your previous one. The holiday trip to France you have been planning to go with your family could be made possible with the remaining cash.
You might've known about both advantages and disadvantages of holding such big prize money. The prize is vulnerable to theft, so my advice will be to spend them wisely as soon as possible. You ought to be careful when investing them in banks, where you have to check the interest rates. But don't worry, you would become a star customer for depositing a huge sum. Adding to that, the rich feeling you acquire is priceless.
Hope you follow my advice. I'll meet you up very soon.
Yours loving friend
Prasanth Gunasekaran
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... have to check the interest rates. But dont worry, you would become a star customer...
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... rich feeling you acquire is priceless. Hope you follow my advice. Ill meet you...
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...eless. Hope you follow my advice. Ill meet you up very soon. Yours loving ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4837398374 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34980799088 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6526247922 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0526315789 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9473684211 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05263157895 4.34317383033 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142580291295 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498438416803 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555140889094 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660141199491 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452773291436 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.