You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterexplain why you want to take time off workgive details of amount of time you needsuggest how your work

Essay topics:

You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to request to you that I want some unpaid leave from regular schedule of my job. my younger brother's marriage is held on 20th December. I want to be part of this memorable event of my brother's life. so I am planning to take time off from work to manage all wedding arrangements.

I am very much aware that my position here please a crucial role in my office. Therefore, I have just planned to take holidays from 17thDecember to 21st December which is five days and I will be back at work on 22ndDecember. I would endeavour to come earlier than usual and on weekends, if needed in order to catch up on anything I had missed.

Despite my leave from office. I will check my emails daily respond to important ones and be available for emergency phone calls. Besides, I have already talked to my colleague Robin and he is ready to take few important responsibility of mine in the main time.

I am looking forward for your positive response.
Your sincerely,
Reet kaur

Votes
Average: 10 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ork to manage all wedding arrangements. I am very much aware that my position he...
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...y office. Therefore, I have just planned to take holidays from 17thDecember to 21...
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...r to catch up on anything I had missed. Despite my leave from office. I will che...
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...y talked to my colleague Robin and he is ready to take few important responsibili...
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...our positive response. Your sincerely, Reet kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52747252747 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66908576826 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7910924249 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202181277639 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682693998687 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653336346052 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108234780619 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614508993142 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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