You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:explain why you want to take time off workgive details of the amount of time you needsuggest how your

Essay topics:

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:

explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission to take 15 days leave from 1st march to 15th march,2019 as I have to go to India for my sister's wedding.
My sister is getting married on 12th march in India and I have to be by her side on this special day. I will reach India on 2nd march and than I will have to do some wedding preparation. During my time off, I will be available for any emergency calls from the office and would regularly check and reply to important work e-mails. I have even talked to Rina and Tina, they have agreed to share some of my work responsibilities.
I would really appreciate if you grant me an unpaid leave from 1st march to 15th march. I will join the office from next day.
Thankyou in advance for your kind cooperation. Looking for your positive response.
Yours Sincerely,
xyz

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'march 2019'.
Suggestion: march 2019
...ke 15 days leave from 1st march to 15th march,2019 as I have to go to India for my sisters...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ay. I will reach India on 2nd march and than I will have to do some wedding preparat...
^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...share some of my work responsibilities. I would really appreciate if you grant m...
^^^
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aid leave from 1st march to 15th march. I will join the office from next day. T...
^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Looking for your positive response. Yours Sincerely, xyz
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r positive response. Yours Sincerely, xyz
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38709677419 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51235448893 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7620374871 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193927119082 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818003963883 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572216685737 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111788693006 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495921695638 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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