Some people believe that children should listen to and obey their parents. Others believe that children should think and do things on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely believed that kids should follow parents advice. However, some people think that children should take decisions on their own. I strongly opine that children should follow the instructions given by their parents.
Firstly, children do not have maturity and knowledge about good behavioural skills. They do not know how to behave in disciplined manner and take important life decisions. To give some examples, he will not know how to show compassion and respect to other living beings, how to talk to elders etc. Due to lack of proper awareness, it is difficult for kids to take right decisions.
On the other hand, parents can develop life skills like discipline, moral values and decision making ability in children. Parents have the necessary experience to make correct choices and they can help child to build his future. Obeying parents can help the child to become a better person. Parents can help to shape a child's future by teaching him the difference between right and wrong choices and also by making the child understand the consequence of wrong behaviour or decision. For instance, a child may not like going to school, which is necessary for him but his parents can convince him by explaining the importance of studying and the consequences he might have to face if he remains illiterate. So to summarize, father and mother can play an important role in developing the skills required to sustain in the society.
To conclude, I strongly agree that kids should follow their parents advice as they can help develop their ability.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98461538462 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58815005555 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8735183941 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213531869416 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905736705249 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114922684177 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1767669353 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159796213964 0.056905535591 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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