Your next door neighbor owns a small dog which barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something can be done about the dog. In your letter,•Your reason for writing•What would you like to happen?•Be pol

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Your next door neighbor owns a small dog which barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something can be done about the dog. In your letter,
• Your reason for writing
• What would you like to happen?
• Be polite and nice

Dear Sandra,
I am writing this letter in regards to your cute dog that you bought recently. Although, he is tiny, he barks a lot and because of that I am going through some troubles.
As you know, I am preparing for my Physiotherapy License exam which is scheduled next week. It is a very important test for me as after passing it, I will be able to work as an independent physiotherapist. However, because of the continuous barking noise, I am unable to concentrate on my studies. Furthermore, I am also not able to have sound sleep because of barking noise at night and this ruins my following day.
I would be grateful to you if you can take some action on this issue. I anticipate that a mouth cover can help to reduce barking. you can also take him to a veterinary specialist to check if he is having some illness that irritates and makes him uncomfortable.
I am hoping that you would take a prompt action in this regards.

Yours Sincerely,
xyz

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sandra, I am writing this letter in regards to y...
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Dear Sandra, I am writing this letter in regards to your cute dog that you bought recently....
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...rks a lot and because of that I am going through some troubles. As you know, I ...
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... night and this ruins my following day. I would be grateful to you if you can ta...
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Suggestion: You
...mouth cover can help to reduce barking. you can also take him to a veterinary speci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... irritates and makes him uncomfortable. I am hoping that you would take a prompt...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... that you would take a prompt action in this regards. Yours Sincerely, xyz
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on in this regards. Yours Sincerely, xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49142857143 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83284525608 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611428571429 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2461765531 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4545454545 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211085344131 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824142076707 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739144590268 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106012557424 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513273301311 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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