Your next door neighbor owns a small dog which barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something can be done about the dog. In your letter,•Your reason for writing•What would you like to happen?•Be pol

Essay topics:

Your next door neighbor owns a small dog which barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something can be done about the dog. In your letter,
• Your reason for writing
• What would you like to happen?
• Be polite and nice

Dear Sir and Madam,

I am a nearby resident living next to your apartment and currently pursuing a degree in mathematics in Yale University. My subject being very tough, I need to spend more time studying and working through practice problems. I am writing to let you know my concern regarding ongoing barking of your dog.

Let me explain you in more detail. Your dog, though tiny, makes lot of noise and continue to bark until late in the night. Due to this, I am unable to concentrate on my studies and not getting enough sleep during the night.

I would request you to do something to reduce barking of your dog. Perhaps, you could lock it in a room at least during the night. I don’t mean to offend you but, I really need to work hard for my exams next week. I hope you could understand my situation and would control your dog. If you would like to discuss on this further, please feel free to call me. I hope we can resolve this smoothly. Thank you.

Yours sincerely
John welsh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, regarding, so, at least, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49726775956 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35274935852 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5233698564 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3076923077 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319767324816 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112120207524 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970827929092 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199334884092 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045330351799 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.