After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is quite obvious that students after their graduation to look for an employment. Some say that graduates upon completing their education should work where they would get high paycheck instead of the work they find interesting. I disagree with this notion and suggest that fresh graduates should choose a career where their interest is. This essay will explain my opinion in detail.
To begin with, students, while in college always dream about their future career prospects and aspire to take up an employment which they like the most. Some will get tempted with lucrative salaries offered by some companies. If a person joins in a company with the sole reason of getting high pay, might get frustrated in the long run. For example, Morgan Chase recently published an employee satisfaction survey only to reveal that more than fifty percent of their workforce expressed their dissatisfaction with their duties; even though, they are well paid.
On the other hand, people who have chosen a career path in-line with their area of inspiration are performing better at their organizations. This is because they are self-satisfied with their nature of work; though the salary they draw is a bit less. Such employees, due to their hard work with enthusiasm are likely to climb up the corporate ladder towards highest positions in their company. For instance, a survey carried out recently by Nielsen provides enough evidence that seventy percent of top executives in all organizations chose their employment according to their extreme interest in that area.
To summarize, higher compensation will never make a person happy if they don’t find their work appealing. Hence, I agree to a large extent that students should choose their employment in accordance with their desires.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'towards the highest'.
Suggestion: towards the highest
...likely to climb up the corporate ladder towards highest positions in their company. For instanc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yment in accordance with their desires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21527777778 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67186992365 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0332058123 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146299533539 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622828894826 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441972032149 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104043871873 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210039081395 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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