Some people believe that children should listen to and obey their parents. Others believe that children should think and do things on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The youth at the present time resembles a behavior that sometimes deviate from the society's moral standard. Some individuals feel that children today tend to disobey their parents and become independent on their own yet, others continue to follow their orders. Both arguments will be presented and my opinion will also be stated.
As a traditional way of life persists in some places, younger generations would exhibit great respect to their parents. Because of this, children would obey what their elders are commanding them. This is what the usual scenario in the Philippines' culture, taking into account how families is giving paramount importance to child rearing. A teenager cannot behave whatever he/she wants to for the reason that, their parents have instilled much discipline towards their offspring.
On the other hand, people suggest that a child should already learn to live by themselves and not to rely on their mother and father anymore. If this happens, the youth could be able to gain independence and experience the different walks of life alone. As a positive consequence, the minor would be capable to withstand future predicament that they may encounter along the way. Also, the fact that they already know how to live a life without assistance of somebody, would make them a strong person that they can be.
To my mind, children could be allowed to live independently at the right age. This is when they are mature enough to handle problems and can think of the best way to solve them. All things considered, one should make it a point to give credit to their parents as giving back their hardships and sacrifices through obedience and respect to them. After all, a person's success in life could not be achieve without the guardian's help in all facets of individual's well-being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ience and respect to them. After all, a persons success in life could not be achieve wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, well, after all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01328903654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58270980785 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3287055044 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241272159613 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748760161841 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080692664755 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14316913137 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474028250278 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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