You are working in giant company which does financial or other items help to the different group of local community. Write to your manager about some group you want to provide help next year.
Describe a group.
What help do the group need.
What kind of help you expect to provide.
us" style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:navy;background:white">Dear Joe
us" style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:navy;background:white">I am writing you to suggest which group should we supplying the help desk services next year. it is the pmo, the project management office. The pmo is consisted of 4 full-time female project managers and 1 leader. generally speaking, the duty of this department is managing the process of the main projects in our company.
us" style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:navy;background:white">But unfortunately, all the members in this department are bad at using computers. Moreover, they also need a training about how to make a keynote on MAC computer. Therefore, they have asked us for help. From my point of view, if we support them with the it skills, we can bring a huge benefit to our company on account of the improving of efficiency by project managers.
us" style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:navy;background:white">I have made a list of the services which we can supporting them. The list include training, help desks, translating and software development. generally speaking, it’s enough for supporting the daily routine of the pmo.
us" style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:navy;background:white">I am hoping that we can make a great teamwork.
us" style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:navy;background:white">Yours sincerely
us" style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif; color:navy;background:white">Nathan
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...ade a list of the services which we can supporting them. The list include training, help d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 937.175257732 176% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.82352941176 4.54256449028 194% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 14.0243534684 2.54303337028 551% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631016042781 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.41237113402 170% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3864171674 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3846153846 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0481953589155 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03290915413 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362937742788 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0337357375415 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471820116458 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 8.37731958763 326% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.41 70.7449484536 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.2 7.45979381443 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.28 8.71597938144 382% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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