Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Nowadays, the international trade of food seems to be a trend in many countries. Customers can easily buy many sorts of foreign foods from supermarkets. Therefore, some experts hold the view that shops should only sell the food manufactured by the local farmer than imported from overseas. From my point of view, I don’t agree with this viewpoint. Even though this behaviour can bring some temporary benefits. This essay will give a reasonable discussion.
Primarily, the imported trade of food will bring large numbers of foreign currency earnings. Generally speaking, this income is crucial to governments and overseas business companies. If the government blocked the importing, the performance of these companies will decrease. Some employees will lose their jobs. Moreover, the food comes from overseas also bring the motivation to local food companies. To learning the new processing will becoming necessary to the practitioner. To sum up, the competition in the food market is good for the development of local economies.
Secondly, customers prefer to have various choice of eating. The kinds of vegetables and meats in local are always keeping the same. If things continue this way, people will feel boring. Therefore, the imported fruits or fishes could enrich people’s dinner tables. Furthermore, foreign foods also can support different kinds of nutrition to the local citizen. The latest data shows that foreign fishes are rich in DHA which can clean up the toxin in men’s blood.
In conclusion, self-isolation form international trade is dangerous, the government should import more foods from other countries. What’s more, they should encourage the native farmers and food companies to focus on the quality of their products. Only in this way, the goods which made by them can be export to other countries.</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52920962199 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31544781814 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4642281562 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1363636364 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2272727273 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264221991535 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700233936515 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795562470149 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154337988448 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443191510607 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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