Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree.
it is argued that stores should focus on selling local food rather than offering food imported from other areas. this essay totally agrees with this statement because local residents usually prefer the delicacies of their home town and the local suppliers will be significantly encouraged to produce more food.
local food serves consumers’ taste better than imported food. this is because people have eaten their local food for many years and they know their favorite flavor, therefore, they are usually afraid to try something new. If stores serve what customers want, they will then turn huge profit from their business. For example, a chain of grocery shops in my town in district 5 only provides steaks cooked in Vietnamese traditional ways and these shops are always crowded days and nights. In contrast, some stores in the same district selling sushi imported directly from Japan had to close their business because not many locals are familiar with this type of food.
farmers and cooks will be highly motivated to produce more food to sufficiently supply distributors. As the demand of customers is high, stores will need a bigger and more stable supply of food to grow their business. this is a great news to the local suppliers and they will also likely boost their productivity as a result. For instance, it has been reported that farmers in Binh Duong province have significantly increased the supply of rice from 5 tons to 8 tons monthly thanks to a huge rise of consumption of local citizens since 2013.
In conclusion, sellers and distributors should concentrate on providing local food rather than imported food as people in the local areas have a tendency to buy local food and suppliers’ productivity will be boosted drastically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14482758621 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66982967388 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7418807372 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345729553907 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146044938992 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136118433863 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256596892131 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116501223025 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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