Some people think that advertising on TV is useless and others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, advertising act as an important role in the media platform such as TV and radio. some experts hold the view that advertising is not necessary to the development of society. From my point for view, I disagree this viewpoint. In my opinion, ads have make a large numbers of benefits to our economics. this essay will give a reasonable discussion.
Primarily, some ads have a good story, it makes the advertising full of artistic value. For instance, the most famous ad <1984> which made for Apple computers. it has a big influence to a generation. Moreover, ads also can increase the performance of selling of products. When the income of companies has increased, they will have more investment to expansion their team of employees. In the circumstances, the rate of unemployment will become lower. generally speaking, this effective is good for everyone in our country.
Secondly, the companies always co-operate with young artists in advertising films. For instance, the Cocacola always use some painting which drawn by graffiti artists. if not, these artists couldn’t make money by selling their production. Furthermore, the big brand company discovery them and give them the opportunity to be famous. The may be the great master in the future.
In conclusion, advertising has made a great contribution to our lives in a strange way. Sometimes we may ignored that. However, if you search the released data of economics, you will find the importance of it. In a word, advertising can make our lives better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.124 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00902376195 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.038136196 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.0 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9047619048 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121249274417 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333521581261 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405868090202 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757588542963 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573175682615 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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