Many people believe that money is a good gift for a teenagers while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the world of today, there has been an increasingly popular tendency that people give money for teenagers as they consider it as a reasonable present, while some are against this trend due to its possible drawbacks. From my perspective, I find the latter agreeable for several reasons.
On the one hand, money may be a suitable gift for youngsters, thanks to some of its benefits. The first advantage worth mentioning is that money collected from gifts may play an indispensable role in some young students’ lives. In fact, in some cases, students whose families do not provide them with support on their education fees and daily expenses may take advantage of that money to release their financial burdens. Another benefit of this act is that according to some research, not only does early exposure to money help teenagers to understand better about the value of the money, it also helps them to start planning their financial budget, which is obviously beneficial to their adult life in the near future. For instance, children who are allowed to get familiar with money during their early stages of life seem to have a better understanding and systematic thinking in doing business when they grow up, compared to those that are prohibited from touching money when they were young.
On the other hand, there are undeniable drawbacks of giving money as a gift to youngsters. First of all, by giving money for them too easily, adults may spontaneously create an illusion that everyone can have free access to material things, without spending any effort. Indeed, this will clearly have detrimental effects on their mindset and philosophy of life, later on, breeding potential crimes and social evils. Secondly, young people are often curious and vulnerable. Without strict controls from parents, not only do they spend that amount of money into useless and unnecessary things advertised on means of media, but they may also use that in drug-trafficking. Last but not least, some young people have already thought that getting money as a gift should be their right, and kept asking for more. Although some families can afford it, some may find it out of the question and have to work exhaustedly or go stealing to satisfy their kids’ wants.
In conclusion, even though there are some advantages of the trend in which people give money for teenagers as a present, I hold the belief that the trend still has some irrefutable demerits; therefore, it should be discontinued in the today’s society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0623501199 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68798733152 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558752997602 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5512559095 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.733333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181358372941 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747529335308 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577682251755 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129886254184 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213553578402 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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