Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world, there is an increasingly popular tendency that youngsters often take a gap year after graduating from schools and universities, in order to go travelling or work. although this action has several drawbacks, I am of the opinion that it is more of a help than a hindrance.
there are some obvious disadvantages of taking a year off after graduation. The first disadvantage worth mentioning is that after a full year without touching or revising the knowledge acquired from schools, students may experience an overwhelmed or have their knowledge in some specialized fields, like science, biology or mathematics, forgotten and negligence. As a consequence, they will fail to be skilled workers and reduce their ability to apply their theories and practical knowledge into real working life. Another drawback of taking a gap year is that not only does it reduce opportunities for people to find a well-paid job, but it also has adverse influences on their competitiveness when seeking for a job. In fact, employers often have a negative perspective on the gap year. For instance, if job hunters are placed in a situation when they have to consider between candidates who graduated and have already gained one year of skilled-job-related experience and those who sorely have a year with full of travelling and doing part-time jobs at entry-level, the former will absolutely be their first choice.
Nevertheless, I strongly agree that students should take a year gap after their academic graduation. The first advantage of this is that they will be able to make and save money from jobs that they work on a part-time or full-time basis. Indeed, this will help them release the financial burdens arising from tuition fees. The second benefit is that going travel during this time enables students to broaden their horizons about the outside world, as well as gain more hand-on life experience, which is extremely beneficial to their later working life, as this is one of the essential skills to climb further on their career ladder. Last but not least, a gap year seems to allow students to let off steam and recharge their batteries, in order to be fully ready in both aspects of mental and physical health to enter the labour market.
In conclusion, although the trend that students taking a gap year has some irrefutable demerits, it is undoubtedly true that it does more good than harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0525 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88313089366 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4729884209 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.357142857 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285205925623 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102194124881 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691171676524 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170993646619 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175692350765 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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