Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is rather a controversial subject that whether students should start university right after they got graduated from high school or spend some time to take a trip or gain work experience. In my opinion, pursuing education is more beneficial than obtaining hands-on experiences through doing a job or taking a journey.
First of all, pupils are at the beginning of their adulthood when finishing high school. At that milestone, they need to focus on elevating their knowledge and improving their chance to become a successful society member. University offers them such opportunity to grow and flourish by providing them the information they require to boost their chance to find their dream occupation. Although being in a work environment can be educational in so many ways such as being challenged by real life problems instead of theoretical ones which undergraduates often face in their classrooms, it does not teach youngster how to analyze various situations and react accordingly as they learn by practice and not by technique.
Secondly, a fresh high school graduate is naive and does not have the skills to travel by his/her own or be thrown to a grown up environment to work alongside individuals who are double his/her age. Higher education institutions give young adults the opportunity to learn valuable social skills in a safe and secure environment supervised by authorities. For example, group course projects not only teach students how to use the acquired knowledge and apply it in a real subject but also make them take responsibility for their role in a team and learn how to deal with their other teammates in different situations. Furthermore, students can mingle with individuals their own age and exchange their knowledge with each other. They may even get persuaded to change their subject entirely which had been jumped into job market, they would not have identified their true passion and would have wasted their time gaining experiences in a field they would have eventually quit.
In conclusion, although traveling and having hands-on experiences are both valuable, it is more beneficial for students to continue their study in a university or college to build a better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'boosting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: boosting
...iding them the information they require to boost their chance to find their dream occupa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2061281337 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89518642265 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576601671309 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.878569479 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.75 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987613964527 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418050267926 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435822269776 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780215215031 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545576319502 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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