Some people believe that money is the best gift for teenagers while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Giving money to youngsters as a gift is compelling from the view of some. This offers them a feeling of freedom which leads to joy and excitement. They can purchase whatever they like and spend the money as they wish. As a result, they learn how to treat money. A research on adults who received money as a gift when they were teenagers showed that they can handle themselves financially better and can make better decisions on how to spend their money or where to invest. This shows receiving money as a present may have leads to positive consequences.
Nevertheless, Some teenagers may use the money in the wrong ways such as buying drugs or fast-foods but not useful, so is not a good idea from this perspective. Some believe that money as a gift is problematic since parents cannot control how it has been spent and for what. In their opinion, gifts such as books and clothes are the most suitable presents for children since they cannot be traded with drugs and other unhealthy things. In other word, other types of gifts than money are safer and better for youth.
In my opinion, mostly the aim of giving a gift is to make somebody happy and for some receiving money stimulate that feeling more than anything else. In addition, money gives them the option to decide and consequently, they will be better decision-makers. However, I believe parents have to closely monitor how the money is being spent and on what and advise their children on these issues.
In summary, money as a gift for teenagers is a controversial topic while offering money as a gift to youth may provide them a more stable financial life in their future as it helps them to develop the required skills of handling money, this has to be accompanied by advice of parents on how and on what to spend money and strict monitoring by parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, as to, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67492260062 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54789921187 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495356037152 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1968449719 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281352833071 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113006074459 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777230888135 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189600653674 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441289712627 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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