You have received a letter about winning a prize in a competition organised by the media house, but didn’t receive that prize. Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper about it and say
– Describe the competition and prize in details.
– How do you feel about it?
– What do you expect the editor to do about it?
Dear Editor,
I am writing in connection with the competition which was arranged and hosted by the media house. The competition was on who can name all Iran’s province names within a minute and it occurred at Pars Hotel in Shiraz on 23/04/2019. I have received a letter that I have won the prize which is a cheque with a value of $1000 and I will receive it on at my address on 01/06/2019.
I became very happy and excited and I bought a new car which I need badly. I do not know what happened, I got nothing up to now. It made me very upset and put me in the worst situation I have ever had economically as I have bought a new car based on that hope. Therefore, I have no money left to pay for my next rent.
Could you contact the organizer and do a follow-up as you have a close connection with them? I hope with your help I can receive the money and pay my next rent. I highly appreciate your help and consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Sorena Ashkani.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I bought a new car which I need badly. I do not know what happened, I got nothin...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te your help and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you as soo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36734693878 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62582170158 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2790113794 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220576063083 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628103581972 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667087056452 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109524256777 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710287058854 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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