You have received a letter about winning a prize in a competition organised by the media house, but didn’t receive that prize. Write a letter to the editor of a newspaper about it and say
– Describe the competition and prize in details.
– How do you feel about it?
– What do you expect the editor to do about it?
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to ask for your assistance. Almost, two months ago media house held a cookery match between people throughout the country. three weeks next. Also, organizers appoint three awards for first to third individuals that was television, oven and smart phone respectively.
I would be truly keen on participate in this competition because not only my cooking is well but also, I thought that I could really win. For this reason I effort a lot in my home and then attended in match with the aim of became first. Three weeks later I receive a letter with this theme: you have won a television station. Your prize will forward to your address maximum ten days later. Unfortunately, I do not receive my reward until the moment of writing letter.
Therefore, I would be very grateful if you publish my request in your newspaper, and also, if your colleagues get contact with the media manager for follow up this problem.
Thank you so much for your help in this matter.
Your sincerely:
Mostafa Mohammadi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Three
... between people throughout the country. three weeks next. Also, organizers appoint th...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, then, therefore, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95480225989 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62652930635 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5645751248 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15017707041 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530189873736 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612276684867 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813767322787 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695823943346 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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