Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Entrance to the universities has been the dream of many young people regardless of their background. However, there are limited seats in each university therefore they cannot accept everyone. Nevertheless, It is usually harder for people from villages or small cities to get to the universities since they have to help parents with agricultural activities and also they are not financially strong. Thus, universities have to make themselves more accessible to those people.
Being a youngster in a village or a small city makes it possible to enjoy nature and have healthier air to breathe whereas it provides a very hectic lifestyle and exists not enough time to study as much as others have. Children from these areas have to help their parents with many of the agricultural tasks such as irritation of the farm and milking cows while their counterparts in the big cities have none of those concerns.
People of rural areas are usually from the average class of income and therefore they have not either money to spend on private teachers or access to institutions that provide special extra-curriculum services to make students ready for university in the big cities. They have to be more diligent and study harder to get what they deserve.
In summary, It is not a fair situation if universities do not consider special treatment to people from rural and village areas as their life is more hectic and they also have fewer features available as they are in high school in comparison with youth in medium size and big cities.<br>
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
... youngster in a village or a small city makes it possible to enjoy nature and have he...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...big cities have none of those concerns. People of rural areas are usually from t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77219317232 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1373820386 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241498913807 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111056959952 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385570953451 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156197423211 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586469401017 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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