People have historically attempted to achieve a perfect society. However, it is difficult to decide what an ideal society would be like.
What would be the most important element of a perfect society?
What can normal people do to make society more perfect?
Many religions and ideologies have been formed around the idea of the ideal society. They provided a definition for it and in most of them, the ideal society is the one that inhabitants behave as they are ordered. However, none of them when they had political power were able to satisfy their people. Nevertheless, many of them have defined correctly some of the required elements for an ideal society. In this essay, two of the required elements will be mentioned and also the duty of each citizen toward it will be explained.
Reaching a perfect society is impossible because humankind is imperfect. However, a simple definition of an ideal society is where people feel glad and appreciate their lives. Two of the most important required elements to gain such a society are justice and embracement of diversity. There is no doubt that a community without an independent and fair justice system is not a sustainable society and falls eventually. There are many examples of countries and societies that do not exist anymore or have changed radically to have better living conditions, for example, ancient Egypt. People who live in a society with such a justice system feel happier and appreciate their society more such as western countries nowadays.
Diversity is also a key point because there is no one that can lead the society toward perfectionism alone and the difference in thoughts is needed to eliminate the flaws of the celebrated theories and define new ways of living. In many societies in order to reach a perfect and ideal society, they cracked down every different thought and made a monolithic society which not only did not reach to the ideal goals but also failed. The best example of this is the Soviet Union. Therefore, a society that wants to reach the best should embrace diversity.
People have a key role to take their societies toward a better society. They have to educate themselves about democracy and also the value of diversity in a community. They also demand their governing system for an absolute independent judiciary to act fair and square. In this way, they can make sure that their tomorrow is better than today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9478021978 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6359929479 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489010989011 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9116090959 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7894736842 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295957677027 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924476893764 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573881070188 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172842044919 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642600031862 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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