Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.
What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
hectic life style no time for exercise and family
gig industry less time
Health and happiness of the people have been the topics of interest of scientist. Experts believe that previous generation were healthier and happier than the current generations. They count more exercise and having more family time as the reasons of this. From their prospect, many feeling alone and have health issues today. Therefore this essay will look at the causes and possible solutions for this situation.
The gig-industry demands that people work much more than before and some may have even more than two jobs to be able to secure their income and financial conditions. It also requires that people spend more time on education to keep themselves updated and therefore not falling behind and get fired. Many recent researches on today’s life style has mentioned that people due to imposed hectic life style by gig-industry have less time to take care of themselves and spent time with others. Another reason that gets people away from each other is the internet. Many these days spend lots of time to play games and watch movies alone instead of being with their friends and family or going for an exercise. Loneliness and health problems are quite obvious results of the new life style chosen by people.
Although gig-industry is highly demanding and people have less time to spend with their family and doing some motions, using time management skill can be the solution. Following time management principles offers us some time for going to some fitness clubs or have some time with our family. The way that it work is that it asks for prioritisation of the tasks and based on that during one tasks the higher focus is on it. Consequently, the task is done faster and with better results. Since people are faster in doing tasks we have more free time which we can use it for taking also care of themselves. Another point that should be considered is that less time has to be spent on the internet and internet based connection should be limited and more face to face communication has to be considered as a part of the daily life. If one consider these suggested solutions can find enough time to go for exercise and being with his family which leads to a healthier and happier life.
To recapitulate, the gig-industry and the internet the main time consuming in everybody’s life nowadays and therefore no time remains for people to look after themselves. in order to turn round this situation, using time management concept and curbing the use of internet as a way to make communication as a solutions are proposed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, may, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91935483871 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59885874322 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479262672811 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8970767423 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263975224964 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879401083476 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585061216278 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175436458131 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704851042404 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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