Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.
What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
Some people infer that old generation were ecstatic and robust in olden days, as they were physically and socially active, but currently they feel alone and face health issues. This is due to certain key factor, whereas few remedial measures can curb it out. Both the causes and solutions are described further.
To begin with, migration of young generation, these days, make aged people feel alone. Since the job opportunities has raised in metros, workers are shifting there for better employment and leading a nuclear family. For example, locals from Assam are shifting to Delhi for job, which fosters the parents to pass their life alone in rural regions. Additionally, modern life style has also impacted their health. As vehicles are extensively utilized by the pensioners, they lack the walking , which could make them prone to health issues.
Still, there are several solutions to eradicate such problems. Firstly, government must encourage employment in pastoral areas. If the adults are getting better working opportunities in their own region, the migration would come at a halt. For instance, development of industries in village can provide employment to citizens, which could hover the shifting to metro cities to stay with their family members. Secondly, more public places must be developed. Whit increase in garden and recreational centres, the retirees would be stimulated to stay in a health atmosphere to improve their health.
In conclusion, old generation is facing loneliness and health issues in present day as compared to olden days because they are living alone and avoiding transportation. However, this can be curbed out by create work prospects in rural areas and construction recreational areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41544117647 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73796721374 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636029411765 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8519992802 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154624546264 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458981627492 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366415856957 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929729512567 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440889953356 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.