More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries.
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
Increasing number of pupils are considering foreign universities and colleges located abroad for the purpose of their education. From my perspective, I consider that the demerits gained by such as a trend are more compared to any merits it might bring. My thoughts are narrated comprehensively in forthcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly,there are several benefits of going through a course in foreign country. Firstly, receiving a specific course is a minor benefit. For instance, those learners who has aimed to learn about the life cycle of different birds in nature, there are only a few universities in the world,such as in American and Australia, offering such special type of course. Moreover, higher chances to work abroad can also be considered beneficial to small extent. Since immigration department of all nations provide priority to the individuals, who has completed a course in their territory, a majority of students are of the mind of getting a degree in other countries.
Nevertheless, despite of minor advantages as above, I strongly believe that shifting to the land of foreign people for the purpose of study could face serious drawbacks. One potential dangerous problem is financial loss. The colleges in foreign countries beg huge amount of fees for even a simple course. Even, there is more expenditure on other tasks such as charges of visa for immigation as well as fees for agent hired. In addition, loss of health is also another critical issue. While students at foreign land are alone and not accustomed with their weather, there are higher chances to get prone to diseases like viral fever of even heavy cold.
In conclusion, loss of wealth and health far outweighs any positive aspects such as learning specific course or increased chances of migration that are resulted by joining an education centres in foreign nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2474916388 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91553637347 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7040726466 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201354481399 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532082791987 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377378074632 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102245097965 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337552565711 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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