People now have the freedom to work and live anwhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Humans are at their liberty to search a job and stay at any place on the globe owing to advancement in technological knowledge and transportation system.From my perspective, I think that such a trend attracts more merits compared to any demerits it might bring.My thoughts are narrated comprehensively in forthcoming paragraphs.
Despite a few minor drawbacks in the following paragraph,I consider that benefits gained by possibilities to work and stay in any country are extremely useful.An evident benefit is decrement in unemployment.Since individuals are able to communicate with each part of the universe by internet connection,the chances of getting a job has improved to a large level.Moreover, variety in work is another significant positive aspect.Even,with increase in the number of airports and ports, citizens are easily able to move in any country.These migrants are able to work with different types of jobs like farming,fishing and construction.
Admittedly, there are few simple drawbacks with working and living in different countries.One basic issue is cyber crime.With development in information technologies, several offensive activities,such as robbery in bank accounts and fraud by credit and debit cards has increased to a huge extent.There are also case of not paying money after getting the work done through online freelancing websites like www.freework.com. In addition,Competition is another negative aspect to be considered.With many people shifting in any developed country, the population will go in increasing.Consequently, there will be more people for less number of jobs in that particular area like Sydney of Australia.
In conclusion,an increase in employment and availability of different work far outweighs any of the disadvantages such as crime in cyber field and competition that could result from getting liberty to work and settle in any part of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68292682927 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8146484044 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599303135889 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.070839221 49.4020404114 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.2 106.682146367 306% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.4 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126110772957 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068322100475 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325874517484 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728731731405 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414173931996 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.0 13.0946893788 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.3 50.2224549098 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.53 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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