You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that i cannot return the Physiology text-book i borrowed from the library on the due date 25th of August 2019. Regrettably, i have to travel to yorkshire to visit my cousin james who is critically ill.
james study at yorkshire university, yesterday i got an emergency phone call that he was seriously sick. The doctors said he has had mini stroke, also known as transient ischemic attack. As the only relative he have in this country, i have been told to come take care of him for a while. i will be spending two weeks in yorkshire and i will not come back in time to return the book i borrowed before its expiry date.
Since i cannot meet up the deadline for returning the book, i would like to renew the loan of the book for an extra two weeks.
i apologise for the inconvenience, looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Romeo Winchester
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...adam, I am writing to inform you that i cannot return the Physiology text-book ...
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... cannot return the Physiology text-book i borrowed from the library on the due da...
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...cousin james who is critically ill. james study at yorkshire university, yesterda...
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...tudy at yorkshire university, yesterday i got an emergency phone call that he was...
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...schemic attack. As the only relative he have in this country, i have been told to co...
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...d to come take care of him for a while. i will be spending two weeks in yorkshire...
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...rowed before its expiry date. Since i cannot meet up the deadline for returni...
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...of the book for an extra two weeks. i apologise for the inconvenience, lookin...
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...r prompt response. Yours faithfully, Romeo Winchester
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63995520305 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3693956968 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190794029293 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638240676576 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520580269581 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101995047985 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573352416185 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.