Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I am unable to return the two books that I have borrowed last month from the library. The last day to return these books is tomorrow, unfortunately I need to leave the city immediately to visit my aunt in India. I would be grateful if you could either extend the due date of returning these books or excuse me on humanitarian grounds.
The reason for this request is that my aunt is seriously ill as she has been diagnosed with a chronic disease. Since I was not aware of this situation, my visit to India is unplanned. Hence, I have booked my tickets on priority for the next flight. In addition, I also requested my best friend to assist me in dropping off the books to the library but we were unable to coordinate in such a short notice. Due to the above reasons, I am not able to fulfill the requirements of returning the books on time.
Lastly, I will update you once am back and would personally come over to speak to the supervisor with regards to my account. If you may want to check my records, I have been using this library for past few years and have always returned library books in time. Therefore, I seek your kind assistance to excuse me for this round.
Appreciate your swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Nur Amirah
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49576271186 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53443322396 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580508474576 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.954532744 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6153846154 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267762722823 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900097442935 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753634706053 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151885287445 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819745125192 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.