Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my profound interest to join the excursion trip to Malaysia. My daughter is studying in Grade 6 and will be going for this 3 day trip to Malacca. Although, I do not wish to stress her with my presence, but this would be an incredible experience for both of us.
Firstly, I have been to Malacca on various occasions and am quite familiar with the places of interest such as tourist destinations, food and beverages, street markets for shopping and accommodation. Therefore, you will not be required to arrange a tourist guide to assist. Secondly, Malacca is rich in culture, there are certain restrictions in some places and I will be able to address them immediately. As some rules are expected to be followed without signages or information. Thus, you will not be liable for any consequences arising from not abiding the rules. Lastly, I will be able to share my experiences with all children so that they can enjoy and learn more than expected.
Finally, I would be keen to know if parents who volunteer need to pay for trip? Also, will the accommodation be arranged by the school management?
Looking forward for your swift response.
Yours sincerely,
Nur Amirah
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84790746392 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668269230769 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6401888257 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121035938094 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474052645074 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403369584737 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078109126808 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373931021821 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.