Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the parking area allocated for the bicycles. The Wilson parking besides the Kang Kar Mall is an open car park area with limited number of spaces allocated for the bikes. Because I ride and park my bike daily, I would wish to highlight my plight and hopefully you could look into this matter.
Firstly, the spaces allocated are very less due to this I have to wait for a long time for my turn. As I live nearby, it is more economical to ride than to travel by a car. Despite leaving early from home, I mostly reach late for my workplace which is right behind the carpark. This in turn is also causing a lot of problems to the drivers who are waiting behind me at the gantry for me to proceed. Secondly, if I were to be lucky enough to get a parking slot still the trucks and other heavy vehicles occupy the parking space partially. Therefore, I sincerely hope that either the parking slots are increased in number or if you could arrange for a security person in- charge to look after the place. He could handle the queue and also get the heavy vehicle owners to park rightfully. Consequently, there will be no inconvenience for myself and other commuters.
Finally, if such arrangements could be done you would also enjoy higher revenue with more parking facilities as well as lesser complaints. I would like to thank you for your time and look forward for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Nur Amirah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lucky enough to get a parking slot still the trucks and other heavy vehicles occu...
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Line 5, column 622, Rule ID: OR_ALTERNATIVELY[1]
Message: Use simply 'or'.
Suggestion: or
...e parking slots are increased in number or alternatively if you could arrange for a security per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64312267658 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55350018192 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6834813355 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 4.34317383033 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230281507794 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791296056796 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542584155228 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16440610638 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453368531583 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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