Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about an extra room vacancy in my apartment and wish to advertise the same. I live a few miles away from the Delhi University and it is a very convenient location to travel up and down daily. Therefore, It would be an ideal place for any student who prefers to stay near the vicinity.
This is a four bedroom apartment which has two door entry system. While the first entry is from the main door which is currently being used by myself and my helper, the other side of the door is right besides the main door towards the right where you can enter via kitchen. So this will help the student to freely enter and leave the place without disturbing the rest. The room itself is fully furnished with free access to internet at all times. There is a common toilet next to the room which is currently not in use and can be used by the tenant. Also, the tenant is free to cook light meals if she wishes to eat healthy home cooked food. Hence, I wish to let out my space which is spare and not in use at the moment and willing to share with a mature and independent female student. As far as the rental is concerned will be negotiable based on the expectations and requirements from both sides.
Please let me know if there are any female students looking out for an accommodation, they can either contact me directly on my handphone or email me should they need any further information. Looking forward for your swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Nur Amirah
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46043165468 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35178084506 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4146629838 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176690517164 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547871160925 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049838491537 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11782607541 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660749527816 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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