While some people believe that teen years are the most joyful moments of life, others take the view that adulthood is more enjoyable despite of higher responsibilities. In my opinion, adulthood is an enriching experience providing a greater level of contentment.
Many people who believe that teen years are the most blissful years of life is because youngsters' prime responsibility is to study. Since at this stage of life they are expected to study hard and are encouraged to focus on their growth, they are oblivious of the real world challenges. Furthermore, their thinking process and thoughts are confined to a limited group of friends. For instance, a research was conducted by Mediacorp last year on Secondary School students where ninety percent of the students rated their morale and mental health to be utmost favorable. Moreover, teenagers nowadays own minimally a gadget like an iphone or an ipad to play games, that has elevated this situation leading to joyful moments.
On the other hand, others view adulthood as the happiest moments of their life, primarily due the reason that they have either achieved their goals and targets in life or are in process of reaching heights. This in turn provides a sense of pride and achievement to their stride. Also, they are able to live the choice of life they desire without being interfered by anyone. This independence in itself creates moments of pleasure and satisfaction. These moments are not temporary but eternal. When people get rewarded for their achievements is even more important to their lives. Also, family plays an important role in achieving this success. Generally speaking, considering them as a liability is a misguided idea. They are instead supporters and adds more spice to life. For example, if a salesperson achieves his targets and at the same time receive accolades would be the most precious moment of his lifetime. Those moments are not comparable to anything and makes a person cheerful for lifelong.
In conclusion, while both views are commonly held in society, I believe that mature stage of life is more blissful. This is because enjoying life in early years is not as enriching as during independent phase of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
... are the most blissful years of life is because of the fact that youngsters prime responsibility is to s...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...ther hand, others view adulthood as the most happiest moments of their life, primarily due th...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...ther hand, others view adulthood as the most happiest moments of their life, primarily due th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07046070461 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74064546237 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563685636856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5775163869 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.55 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231272149216 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614390914484 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621919257354 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149872741047 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040997739853 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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