You borrowed some books from your school college library Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time Write a letter to the library and explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it

Essay topics:

You borrowed some books from your school/college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library and explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

I am writing concerning the delay in returning two books of history that I borrowed from your library last month and I supposed to return them before 13th june of this month. Allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would not be able to return then on assigned day.
Actually, I need to go away from the city for one weak as an unfortunate incident happened to one of my cousin living in the New York. He met with a road accident and got injuries all over his body. Even though he is stable now, but doctor told him to be under medical supervision for the next weak. Therefore, I have to stay at hospital in order to assist him with every day routine.
To cut off the possible delay, I requested my neighbor to return books to the library as soon as possible. He will be out of town for next two days and return books immediately after getting home.
I would be grateful if you could understand the urgency of this critical situation and would not charge for delay.
Thank you for taking time to read ,and for considering this matter.
Yours faithfully
Brian Ace

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...fter getting home. I would be grateful if you could understand the urgency of t...
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...tuation and would not charge for delay. Thank you for taking time to read ,and f...
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...ay. Thank you for taking time to read ,and for considering this matter. Yours ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, therefore, i suppose

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40404040404 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38471564067 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671717171717 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0554643476 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2727272727 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197447805288 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639460457843 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559626709085 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09925817331 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04105765294 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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