Many people believe that big businesses in addition to generating profits should be involved in and responsible for the social life of the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
These days, people's perspectives for the big companies' focus on only creating big revenues are rapidly changing, and huge organizations are supposed to be get indulged in the work for societal well-being. To a large extent, I concur with this opinion because it is not only the moral duty of big businesses but also they can enhance their brand recognition while doing good for the community.
Firstly, there is not an iota of vacillation that huge profitable companies should consider doing charity as their moral responsibility. For instance, in business terms, it is clearly stated that the environment is one of the stakeholders for all the organizations. Businesses can not do anything that harms the environment, otherwise they are not law-abiding. Statics have shown that an increasing number of multinational companies are adopting environmentally-friendly and sustainable manufacturing and packaging process. Consequently, diminished gaseous, solid, and liquid poisonous emissions have significantly reduced the pollution, which has led to a better quality of living standards for the community members.
Let us not forget either that by taking the onus of doing good for society, companies with high revenue generation can do free advertisement for their business. To exemplify, if a company organizes a social- welfare event once in a month, they can compel people to be their customers by fostering a sense of camaraderie. Thus, it will exert a good influence on the public and they would perceive a good brand image of the company. Eventually, customer loyalty and brand recognition tend to raise their profits in the long term, making this a win-win idea.
On the other hand, there has been a growing body of opinion, believing business should be only focusing on making more profits and considering present governmental authorities to be responsible for the wellbeing of the concerned community. However, I opine that this rigid money-minded belief can deter the companies to be get trusted by the public, leaving them in lower profits and worse cases even out of the business. Therefore, they should take pride to serve their community along with making more wealth.
As shown above, taking pride in serving society with earning large revenues could enhance the image in the minds of the public. Hence, it is recommended that huge organizations must involve in good work for society and the environment. With this conviction, I would hand over the trophy of being good citizens to those businessmen who think about their near community along with earning large profits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33495145631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09738030084 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54854368932 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5324424718 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.294117647 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2352941176 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228482067452 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708801879264 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546226343097 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129096411669 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496105159312 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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