Online shopping is significantly increasing.
What are causes and what are effects of online shopping.
Unquestionably, the globalization has significantly changed the landscape of how consumers behave, think, and most importantly spend. A technologically inclined era has resulted in the integration of all markets across the world over e-commerce shopping websites, enabling people to find and buy things they want using their computers and mobile devices. The negative consequences of this tendency can be seen not only in the hike in unemployment but also in the loss of cultural diversity.
One of the compiling reasons behind the popularity of digital shopping is the availability of international brands around every corner of the world. This puts people at ease of having popular and trending things just by one click on the computer at affordable costs. To cite an example, businesses are using a myriad of discounts and luring offers to attract individuals of every age group to adopt this trend of shopping digitally. In particular, they target the teenagers, who are impressionable and susceptible to get influenced by these inciting offers and shop recklessly sitting at home. Moreover, another contributing reason that impels individuals to buy stuff online is a time-saving concept. Needless to say, it saves a lot of time and effort to search all consumable things without the hustle of going to stores and spending hours running from one shop to another. People just need to have an affordable internet package on electronic devices to browse any related shopping official website to get the desired item.
An inevitable result of online shopping is the disappearance of diverse cultures as people tend to buy similar things under the influence of globalization. They no longer go to the local stores to buy local stuff and losing a sense of camaraderie with their unique culture, resulting in the vanishing of customs, ethos, and beliefs, which are inextricably bound up with a culture. What would a Japanese tea ceremony be without its specially crafted teapot or Fijian Kawa ritual without a bowl made from local tree bark? In addition, another disastrous effect of buying foreign products online is the loss of local jobs. People prefer to buy expansive and trendy things online, considering local things out of fashion, and thus putting local and old school craftspeople out of work.
As shown above, the presence and easy accessibility of exotic and famous brands due to the advanced digital world are contributing reasons behind the increasing trend of shopping online, which might one day completely oust the traditional objects and artists of a local place. Therefore, the essentiality of shopping from local stores in person is recommended.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25526932084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97296437684 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580796252927 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9180984107 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1176470588 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202176529704 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594751399577 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423531464705 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105292077014 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285319800312 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.