You bought the new Television
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Kanwal Kohli and I am one of your frequent customers. I am writing to report the faulty television that I bought from your company on Tuesday last week.
On Tuesday, 12th June, I visited your store to buy television. I bought Toshiba 40 inches TV from your store. At the time of purchasing, I was assured that this was the latest model and best that you can offer. When I reached home , I found that not only the remote is missing from the box and the picture quality was not up to the mark, in fact it was blurry.I immediately called the customer care. They promised to fix this within 2 days but to my surprise, I have not received any communication from them since then.
I am extremely displeased with both the quality of the product that I bought from your company and with the poor customer service. I expect a replacement TV or have my current TV repaired but only if could only be fixed in one day.
I hope to hearing back from you immediately on this.
Yours faithfully,
Kanwal Kohli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... that you can offer. When I reached home , I found that not only the remote is mis...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...t up to the mark, in fact it was blurry.I immediately called the customer care. T...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my current TV repaired but only if could only be fixed in one day. I hope to h...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... if could only be fixed in one day. I hope to hearing back from you immediate...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49738219895 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48209189293 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602094240838 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5792406642 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118675336528 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470897134847 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579559874043 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830596582983 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303802887171 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.