You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen, but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain what happened when you phone the shop
• Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Kanwal Kohli, one of the frequent customers of your shop. I am writing this letter to complain about the Juicer that I bought from your shop, last week on Tuesday.
It is of Panasonic Company and model number is 412322. On the time of purchasing, I was assured by your staff that the quality of blades is very sharpening and it is the best appliance that they can offer. When I reach home, I found that not only the blades of the machine are broken but also jar cap was missing from the box. I immediately called the shop and staff guarantees that they addressed the issue within 2 days but to my surprise, no action was taken since then.
I expect either you provide a replacement product or rectify the issue, if it could be done within 1 day. I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Kanwal Kohli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ssue, if it could be done within 1 day. I hope to hearing from you soon. Yours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47741935484 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38974569679 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670967741935 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5989045243 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1111111111 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244900820691 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844590031091 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502619719421 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142275549675 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422694181146 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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