You had arranged to meet a friend next week, but you have realised that you will not be able to go.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
– Cancel the meeting with your friend and apologise
– explain why you will not be able to meet your friend
– suggest where and when you could see each other instead.
Dear Naina,
I'm extremely sorry to tell you that it will not be possible for me to meet you next week as we had planned. I know it's a last-minute change, but there is something important that came up, which is significant and can't be avoided in any case.
Let me explain it to you. I hope you forgive me once you hear out my reasons. Actually, yesterday i got a call from my elder sister and got to know that her flights to Canada are confirmed for the coming Monday, which she had been trying for a long time now. You see she will be away from India for the next 3 years to complete her higher education in Canada, so I and my parents are going to Punjab to meet her before she flies away. Now you understand how critical time it is for me and my family, and i can't really give up a chance to meet my dear sister, as i won't be able to see her for least the next 3 years after this.
Sorry again, i know you would understand my situation and forgive me. Let's plan to meet in the last week of this month. What do you say? same place?
I eagerly waiting for your reply to this.
Regards
Harpreet
Dear Naina,
I'm extremely sorry to tell you that it will not be possible for me to meet you next week as we had planned. I know it's a last-minute change, but there is something important that came up, which is significant and can't be avoided in any case.
Let me explain it to you. I hope you forgive me once you hear out my reasons. Actually, yesterday i got a call from my elder sister and got to know that her flights to Canada are confirmed for the coming Monday, which she had been trying for a long time now. You see she will be away from India for the next 3 years to complete her higher education in Canada, so I and my parents are going to Punjab to meet her before she flies away. Now you understand how critical time it is for me and my family, and i can't really give up a chance to meet my dear sister, as i won't be able to see her for least the next 3 years after this.
Sorry again, i know you would understand my situation and forgive me. Let's plan to meet in the last week of this month. What do you say? same place?
I eagerly waiting for your reply to this.
Regards
Harpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Naina, Im extremely sorry to tell you that it wil...
^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...you next week as we had planned. I know its a last-minute change, but there is some...
^^^
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... that came up, which is significant and cant be avoided in any case. Let me expla...
^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ear out my reasons. Actually, yesterday i got a call from my elder sister and got...
^
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...al time it is for me and my family, and i cant really give up a chance to meet my...
^
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... time it is for me and my family, and i cant really give up a chance to meet my dear...
^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ext 3 years after this. Sorry again, i know you would understand my situation ...
^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...understand my situation and forgive me. Lets plan to meet in the last week of this m...
^^^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Same
...st week of this month. What do you say? same place? I eagerly waiting for your r...
^^^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Regards Harpreet Dear Naina, Im extremely sorry to tell you that it wil...
^^
Line 16, column 116, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...you next week as we had planned. I know its a last-minute change, but there is some...
^^^
Line 16, column 214, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... that came up, which is significant and cant be avoided in any case. Let me expla...
^^^^
Line 18, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ear out my reasons. Actually, yesterday i got a call from my elder sister and got...
^
Line 18, column 505, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...al time it is for me and my family, and i cant really give up a chance to meet my...
^
Line 18, column 507, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... time it is for me and my family, and i cant really give up a chance to meet my dear...
^^^^
Line 20, column 14, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ext 3 years after this. Sorry again, i know you would understand my situation ...
^
Line 20, column 71, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...understand my situation and forgive me. Lets plan to meet in the last week of this m...
^^^^
Line 20, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Same
...st week of this month. What do you say? same place? I eagerly waiting for your r...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.48453608247 267% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 94.0 32.9175257732 286% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 937.175257732 191% => OK
No of words: 436.0 206.0 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11467889908 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 3.78020617076 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1535072874 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.29128440367 0.622605031667 47% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 290.88556701 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6012682804 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.94845360825 329% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261628534458 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101460600491 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072553394746 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161342634532 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446766637581 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.67 7.59969072165 75% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.