You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say
why you want to come to the restaurant and when
how many people will attend the dinner
what special requirements you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to book your restaurant for an official dinner party, which will be organized to celebrate the company's annual achievement. The company officials have asked me to organize the whole event. So, I have chosen your restaurant for the dinner party in order to celebrate the big event of the organization. The company has decided to execute this mega event on 25th August, 2019 in the evening time. I will confirm the timing later this week.
It is expected that a large number of people would attend this party, which should not exceed thirty people. Therefore, I would like to book your restaurant for at least thirty people. You can have some flexibility of four to five extra, in case of exceeding the number of people. Moreover, my manager and director will also attend the party, but they will arrive at the event later in the late evening.
Furthermore, I would like to ask you to arrange some kind of extra team building activities, such as singing competition, card games, and some extra games. In addition to that, please make arrangements with sweet dishes like sweet milk. Last time when I visited your restaurant, I was amazed by the food provided to me. It was delicious in taste.
I am looking forward to hearing from you on booking confirmation as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Matt Henry
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2019'.
Suggestion: August 2019
...ided to execute this mega event on 25th August, 2019 in the evening time. I will confirm the...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...later this week. It is expected that a large number of people would attend this party, which s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, at least, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81974248927 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5678940461 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622317596567 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2556313937 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277395589205 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825430307261 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576671181509 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138496987986 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777941386669 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.